Sunday, June 30, 2013

1.0 My home and I are bound like shadow and light


Nobody knew where she came from. Nobody knew what had happened in her life that made her come here, to this small town called Appaloosa Plains. It was in the middle of nowhere and not very well known to strangers.


You could see she did not belong here. A huge butterfly decorated most of her back that was so generously revealed to the public. Nobody here had permanent ink on their skin, it was no good. One or two farmers had seen something like this during their trips to the bigger towns around, where they sold their groceries. Some young woman, preferably those who would do anything for a little cash, were also covered in designs and patterns. And here was this woman, carrying it on her back.


Her clothes were partly ripped and did not look like they had been cleaned during the past few weeks. The belt was more perforated than originally indicated, maybe a desperate try to make it even tighter.


She was thin. Very thin. Her legs were only as thick as most of the people's upper arms. On her right ankle there was another of these tattoos, as they were called in town. This one was a small heart, with a banner drawn through it. Nobody could read what it said; possibly there was someone's name on it. Someone she loved, or someone who abandoned her and made her come here.


The first time somebody saw her was on a cloudy Sunday morning, shortly after seven. The old woman had been in her yard, feeding the hens and collecting eggs, when she suddenly saw someone standing not too far away. The exotic appearance drew her nearer, until she could spot the young woman a little better. Without announcing herself, she just watched as the young woman stood on her - assumably own - lawn, staring at the wideness of the land. There was nothing to see, yet she did not move an inch for a long time. When the old woman slowly backed off to get back to her hens, the young girl turned around and eyed her counterpart with her bright, radiant eyes.


"I don't belong here, I know that," she said with an astonishingly melodical voice. "But this property is all I have. If I want to live, it is going to be right here. And there is nothing I want more than live." The old woman swallowed. Those blue eyes had caught her and what the young woman said had touched her deep in her soul. She stretched her hand out, slowly but steadily, as if not to startle the girl, and introduced herself. The girl returned the handshake and then stood silent for a moment. When her mouth opened again, she was hard to hear. "I'm Anna," she said. "Anna Vocis." Then she hastily turned around again and faced the property that was now definitely known to be hers. The old lady understood. Slowly, she went back inside her house, completely forgetting about the hens and the breakfast eggs, telling her husband all about this mysterious young woman.


This woman, however, kept staring at the beautiful nature that surrounded her new home. Was she going to be happy here? Was she going to survive in this foreign town that had its rules and its hierarchy? She simply had to try. This was all she had and all she was.


13 comments:

  1. What a dramatic looking sim! I don't think you got her from the simbin! I like the way you waited until the end of the post to show her face. The bit of description about the extra holes in her belt was very good too.

    I don't know what I was expecting, but it wasn't a DITFT! Your style is even kind of musical.

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    1. No, I didn't get her from the bin - that took me hours of work ;) Not exaggerating here. Hours. While I was putting her together, I already thought of the perfect way to introduce her, which was "in bits and pieces". Although I had pictured some more details, like the mouth or the eyes alone. Unfortunately, my photographic skills were not good enough for that.

      My style is musical? How's that? I like the statement, but don't really know what you see in it (yet). ;)

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    2. I'm thinking of "lyrical." The words flow in a meditative way. Kind of poetic prose with a lot of introspection :).

      And yeah, it takes HOURS once you start messing around with faces is CAS. I got back to fiddling with Echo's face before I started the NIF, and it just takes forever. Like sculpting with clay. But it's also worth it IMHO to get something that is something EA would never create.

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    3. I really like that :) Introspection is exactly what I was going for here, although technically we're still on a heterodiegetic level, because the narrator was/is not part of the world Anna lives in. We'll see how that changes.

      To be honest, playing these three legacies in the first place is such a great opportunity to experience with all kinds of narrators. Within the last few months I have dealt with narratology a lot in university (language and literature studies, yay!), which is why I am crazy about writing on different levels and from different points of view. This is not going to be boring for a veeeery long time :)

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    4. This is EXACTLY what I've been doing with my different sims blogs. It's a good writing exercise!

      My problem isn't that it gets boring. My problem is that sometimes my husband or daughter expects me to spend some time with THEM, and then I'm behind on my blogging :-p.

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    5. And that quickly adds up to a looooooot of postings... I get that ;)

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  2. I'm here telling you that I REALLY enjoyed this opening and hope to soon be caught up, I'm already intrigued by Anna's character and by the notion of a musical DiTFT. I can't wait to read more!

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    1. Welcome! :) I'm very happy to see you here, and hope that your expectations won't be shattered ;) Enjoy reading!

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  3. Hmmm. What an interesting start ... I'm very intrigued to find out more about this young woman and what has happened to lead her to this place in her life. Good job :)

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    1. Welcome to my DITFT :) It's great to hear that the starting chapter caught your interest - happy reading :) You probably caught a good moment - I'm finishing a paper today, and will continue writing tomorrow.

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  4. I decided to start here....hooked already! What a great start!

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